Silence.
He heard the odd hiss of the radiator, and the fading footsteps of his family walking down the hospital halls.
He cocked his ear towards the door, waiting for a sound, waiting for a sign. But still he could hear nothing but the hospital sounds and the occasional rustle of his new grand-child`s blankets.
Then he jumped, as the baby gave and gave a jerk, kicking her grand-father with a tiny, fat foot.
"Well you`re an impatient one aren`t you." the old man laughed "Don`t worry your mother only went for a walk."
The baby moved her little fists, rubbing her soft hat and hitting her grand-father`s old shirt with the cold, shiny buttons.
Eventually the old man gave a frown and rocked the little baby, he looked around the room again. The room was rather grey, and it had a yellow radiator and a window that let a soft light filter in.
"I know." he sighed, and turned to the window "That`s better isn`t it?"
The baby seemed to relax, and the old man laughed as he watched the anger drain from the little human`s face.
The baby however, was more concentrated on the warm rays of light that came from the window. She felt loved and and free-as if she were touching the sky. Even though she couldn`t see and refused to open her eyes at that moment, the little baby could hear the breathing of her grand father. She turned away for a moment and squirmed some more-for the smell of denture cream was far too potent.
"Well you seem to be feeling better..." the old man said with a smile
And he too, felt absolutely, and unconditionally loved.
It was a really nice story and you put allot of detail as well very good
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You really describe well what's happening in the story and that's what I thought made it really appealing to read.
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